Dorm room Pitch 3.0
https://youtu.be/4AxfDf_C8n4
Reflection:
For this pitch I decided to change a couple things. My location and the horizontal camera where the most apparent visual changes I made. This was due to some of the professors critiquing of my second pitch. I also expounded upon my connections, and the nature of my organization. Looking back I realized it was not clear that my org is a non profit. I made efforts to correct this in this latest pitch. Please let me know any adjustments I should make!
Reflection:
For this pitch I decided to change a couple things. My location and the horizontal camera where the most apparent visual changes I made. This was due to some of the professors critiquing of my second pitch. I also expounded upon my connections, and the nature of my organization. Looking back I realized it was not clear that my org is a non profit. I made efforts to correct this in this latest pitch. Please let me know any adjustments I should make!
Switching to a horizontal view was definitely very noticeable and more visually appealing. I think your pitching ability has really improved over the course of the semester. Also, you’re very comfortable in front of the camera, so make sure to nurture that trait since it can become very useful in the future. You’re future business endeavors will surely benefit from these traits.
ReplyDeleteThe presentation seemed natural, the flow was smooth, and your speech was informative, direct, and professional. I've always liked a horizontal view of the video of what I am watching but maybe keep with vertical because what's important is what you are saying, not what is in the background. Your pitching ability has improved over time, and this presentation proved it.
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