17a Dorm Room Pitch part 2
I received very positive feedback on my first video. I was surprised that people commented on the change in tone of my voice becuase it's something I wasn't focusing on. This time around I decided to be standing (as suggested by the professor) and I changed my attire to a suit jacket and button-down to improve the first impressions. Last time I only wore a t-shirt which I think was too informal. I put in alot more practice, which I think helped my flow better. https://youtu.be/cogye3T9Xp4