17a Dorm Room Pitch part 2
I received very positive feedback on my first video. I was surprised that people commented on the change in tone of my voice becuase it's something I wasn't focusing on. This time around I decided to be standing (as suggested by the professor) and I changed my attire to a suit jacket and button-down to improve the first impressions. Last time I only wore a t-shirt which I think was too informal. I put in alot more practice, which I think helped my flow better.
https://youtu.be/cogye3T9Xp4
I think you did a great job of looking back at your feedback, and adding the important takeaways into this second pitch. You can tell that you had practiced this pitch a lot, as it was portrayed in the flow of your pitch overall. Again, your change in tone in voice was beneficial in allowing your audience to be more engaged. Also, your professional attire was also a good addition to the pitch, as it improved the overall presentation. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Kai,
ReplyDeleteI think that your pitch was really great again and I really liked your introductory hook as it captivated me and made want to listen even more. I think that it is really great that you took notes on your feedback from your last video and changed things in this video because it shows your dedication to your product's success and shows that you value feedback from customers and are willing to be flexible in order to meet consumer demands which are ever changing.