Love to see someone else from Miami-Dade. I grew up in Miami gardens, so I am interested to know where you’re from. I like how your pitch was focused on connecting students to volunteering opportunities. This definitely makes me more likely to listen to your pitch, and adds credibility to what you are saying. I’m sure you can use your connections to find a lot of opportunities.
I found your pitch to be straight to the point, engaging, and effective when it came to selling your business. Opening your pitch with a question and an interesting fact hooked me into wanting to continue watching. The ranges of the tone of your voice were appropriate to your pitch, and brought more emotion to make it more engaging. I also found your problem-solution explanation to be straight to the point and persuasive, and I liked how you directly focused your market towards the parents in the pitch. Overall I think you did a great job!
I really liked your pitch and it definitely made me want to put my kid through your program whenever I have kids in the future. I think that it was really effective and I liked how you included that you would use connections in order to make this a viable business idea instead of just an opportunity, it shows potential customers that you are really serious and actually have the resources to put this idea into place, great job.
Love to see someone else from Miami-Dade. I grew up in Miami gardens, so I am interested to know where you’re from. I like how your pitch was focused on connecting students to volunteering opportunities. This definitely makes me more likely to listen to your pitch, and adds credibility to what you are saying. I’m sure you can use your connections to find a lot of opportunities.
ReplyDeleteLol I'm also from Miami gardens, right off 441🤣. Glad you liked it. I was definitely real nervous prepairing for it.
DeleteI found your pitch to be straight to the point, engaging, and effective when it came to selling your business. Opening your pitch with a question and an interesting fact hooked me into wanting to continue watching. The ranges of the tone of your voice were appropriate to your pitch, and brought more emotion to make it more engaging. I also found your problem-solution explanation to be straight to the point and persuasive, and I liked how you directly focused your market towards the parents in the pitch. Overall I think you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Kai,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your pitch and it definitely made me want to put my kid through your program whenever I have kids in the future. I think that it was really effective and I liked how you included that you would use connections in order to make this a viable business idea instead of just an opportunity, it shows potential customers that you are really serious and actually have the resources to put this idea into place, great job.